Happy Birthday redo.

I love so much to see how my lettering is improving! 

(But I hate seeing my old cringe-worth work.)

Once again, not folded pen, but looks gestural, so that is why I'm posting.

For both the original (bottom) and the redo (top), I used my pink Zig #Fudebiyori brush marker. I think the bottom one is at least 2 years old, maybe 3.

Once again, cannot find original. Will update if I do! (I cringe at this so bad.)