alpha exemplar redo

 Original (bottom pic) is an abstract layered alphabet that I use to like, but it now looks too loopy to me.

I'm really loving this challenge as it's making me examine past pieces that I really didn't give much thought to before. I also love how my aesthetics are changing and growing.

Love this new piece. I really like the thicks and thins and varied letters.

tail on "a" is too long, dislike "e" crossbar, m & n tails too much; rest is a mess.

Close up (from IG).

I tried coloring it in to use as an insert, but...meh.