"It's a beautiful day..."

"...in the neighborhood!"  :)

I did the bottom piece in January of this year, but am posting b/c of November of last year! 

Although at first i liked the bottom piece, I was unhappy with:

1. the tail on the a -- too long.

2. the u -- a bit crooked and too condensed

3. the top tail of the f -- crooked

4. how the last u intersects with the l.

Love my redo much better!