More Erasure Poem Art

I love my first one with this poem ( https://foldedpenfan.blogspot.com/2025/08/erasure-poetry.html )   , but decided to try with watercolor too.

Close up

At first, on top of the env. i'm sending it in. But too much going on with the border.

Final piece. Messed up the bottom a bit.

Handmade Booklet (Courage, Strength, Bravery)

 

Originally, this was to be a card of encouragement (you can see "you got this" lettered under the black; scroll for close ups), but I didn't like how it turned out. So, i covered with my Sumi ink (gold sheen) and added more lettering and a strip, and made into a little booklet (about 4 x 5).

Gold script with Posca; Paper strip lettered with gel pen

Quote of encouragement

diff. angle

You can see the "You got this" repeated under the black 

Close up

First page. Using a clear gel pen, I lettered another quote on the Left side.

Close up

Inside page

Close up (layout inspired by my L. Doctor class)

inside spread.

Lettered the word, "Strength" with my new ruling pen, then added some quotes in-between letters.

This is a bit of a mess. Was trying a layout and didn't turn out.

Maybe it can represent fear?

Last page.

Aside from some mistakes, etc., was pretty happy with how it turned out!

"Erasure" Poetry

As posted earlier ( https://foldedpenfan.blogspot.com/2025/08/blackout-poetry.html ), I signed up for a Snail Mail exchange this month and the theme was Black Out Poetry.

Beings I wanted to keep my original creations, I decided to make Erasure Poetry with the poems, and I had so much fun! (especially the top one) Can't wait to make more.

"My Wants..."

black color pencil, a 3d sticker and some splatters.

original

"Smile"

original (I want to frame this!)

Little Poet

original

Another "Smile"

Red Umbrella

 

In going through my papers, I came upon a picture that was included with a frame I bought. I have no idea why I kept it, and at first i thought, "Why am I keeping this??" But then, I found it lovely, and decided to write some lettering to put over it.

I wasn't sure what to write (something about Paris? Nah... to trite), and then I decided to focus on the red umbrella. And to my surprise, a lovely poem emerged. This is only part of it.

"It's raining, it's peaceful. I want to venture out, to use my red umbrella."

There are so many directions I could go with this (a short story perhaps?), but for now, I'll keep it to my poem.

Posca markers on Vellum paper.

script lettering.

original pic.

Blackout Poetry

This month, I'm partaking in another round of the SMC Hello Stranger exchange, and the theme is Black Out Poetry.

I'd vaguely heard of of this, and have seen some of it here and there, but when I read more, I couldn't wait to try. However, 1) we don't have any newspapers, and 2) i'm not one to mar books (well, except for one once, that I was irritated with). BUT then I remembered a book I won from Goodreads, and ended up hating it, and for some reason I had kept it, SO, I found it perfect to use for my new creative endeavor!

I loved how this poem came together, as the book itself is about someone with a warped mind! 😆 (But, that wasn't my inspo for the poem.)

First one I actually blacked out (3rd one I created). Decided to use green b/c of the word, "poison. I could do more with it, but I also kinda like as is. I also love that you can read the first few words a few different ways:

Paranoia I know

My brain is working, Always worry;

Troubled by my head.

Poison I hear again.

But you can also read it this way:

I know paranoia.

Is my brain working?

Always worry, Troubled by my head.

I hear poison again  

I like my first version better.  😊

2nd one I blacked out:

Laugh and say, little poet, why don’t you have a book already?

I wanted to use primary colors, and found this poem perfect for that.

Finished version (I think) -- I may add more.

*This one actually inspired another original poem by me!

Laugh and play little poet

Make your poems, create away!

Have fun with your words

Have fun with your mind

Do and Say what you wish

With your rhymes, with your prose

For you are now the one

In control.

And for now, my very first black out poem! 

I'm so glad I thought to do a heart, as it also adds some good balance (but it was hard to cover up the words -- and I even used a perm. marker). I also used my black sumi ink with gold and love the sheen, as well as a glitter gel pen to outline the words.

I think this is the finished version, but I may add more, the more inspired and creative I get!  😉

Smile, like you made me, love ME.

I absolutely LOVE this!! I was so proud of myself (and I feel another original poem coming on!)

Stay tuned....

accidental play

Another failed lettering piece, and beings it was done in walnut ink, I decided to smear the words, and add more lettering on top, using various pens and styles.

I tried to create that "Laurie Doctor" feel with her "columnal" practice pages

I know it looks like a garbled mess, but I think it's fun.

Whole sheet.

Diff. angle

Close up of black pen script. I love how it looks 3d-ish

Even though it may look like a lettering mess, I still like.

Check Me out!!! (L Doctor site)

 I'm SO honored!!! My work is featured on Laurie's site from her class, "Speak to Me..."  😊

https://www.lauriedoctor.com/featured-student-work/online-course

I love how they included my comments!

I feel so grateful that I was able to take her class. Hoping she offers more online!